The Kris of
Death - A Mystery Novel Set in Bali
By Meredith Morain and
Jerrold Steward
Travel Treasure Books, Hong Kong.In spite of its
setting in laid-back Ubud, Morain and Steward's murder mystery is pacy and entertaining,
writes Astuti Aswadi.
Was it Putu in the paddy with a parang?
Or Kadek in the kitchen with a cleaver? Or perhaps Bagus in the bedroom with the Baygon?
Whodunnit? There's really nothing cosier than a nice murder whether it's set in the
classic English country house (and you can bet it wasn't the butler who did it) or on the
'mean streets' of L.A. favoured by Chandler's Philip Marlowe. There are certain
conventions; obviously a victim (or several) with a few skeletons in the closet; usually
an ingenious or obscure method of despatch; a cast of furtive-acting suspects and
plentiful red herrings along the way. And a good honest sleuth whose accurate perceptions
penetrate even the most airtight alibi.
The Kris of Death transposes the
genre to the 'fertile paradise' of Ubud. "A scream ripped the night," --hardly
the most original opening line but at least we don't have to wait long for the first
corpse to be uncovered. Mitch Hawkins, 'legendary explorer' and loud-mouthed drunkard is
sprawled on his porch not simply dead drunk but decidedly dead. We soon discover that the
obnoxious Mitch had recently bought a valuable kris, which his Balinese wife
believes has evil powers. So we start with promising intimations of black magic. It's also
abundantly clear that Mitch is hardly the flavour of the month among most of his
aquaintances. Nigel, his boorish artist neighbour, is quick to announce "masses of
suspects - a cast of thousands. Bloke what snuffed him is a bloody benefactor." All
too true.
Enter Penelope and Thomas (Pen and T), two
recently arrived travel writers who take it upon themselves to solve the case. An array of
nutty or plain nasty potential perpetrators assemble. A paranoid writer, a debouched
painter of naked Balinese maidens, a swarthy silver trader with a taste for vengeance,
rich and ruthless developers to name but a few. You can only admire the writers' ability
to portray practically every expatriate stereotype imaginable. The Kris of Death
then proceeds to rip through the suspects at a breathless pace. Motives mutate and
multiply; alibis accumulate and are abandonned. Suspects spill the beans with alacrity and
don't hesitate to 'dob the other in' supplying Pen and T with numerous new leads.
Pen and T zip all over Bali following up
obscure clues whilst delivering rather irritating homilies about Balinese culture and the
usual 'evils of development' line. Pen, who has only been here three weeks is staggeringly
fluent in Bahasa Indonesia and even has the local constabulary eating out of her hand
thanks to her 'wealth of insights' into the culture. Thomas meanwhile enlists the help of
some cute little street urchins whose foraging through the rice fields reveals the murder
weapon and the murderer's disguise - a unique and therefore easily traceable mask. But, it
would be churlish of me to criticise the plausibility of the plot, after all even Chandler
himself admitted he had no idea of the outcome of "The Big Sleep". The murder
mystery reader is prepared to suspend belief.
The Kris of Death is entertaining enough
without causing goosebumps. The plot provides plenty of twists and turns and most readers
probably won't finger the killer before Pen and T. The descriptions of "emerald-hued
paddies" and "the real Bali of exquisite countryside" let us know we're in
the familiar domain of literary brochure-speak. Balinese characters are largely peripheral
and somewhat patronizingly portrayed; why do so many writers assume 'the natives' all
speak Bahasa Tarzan - "House very big Ketut still scare" or "I'm cannot
lie." (Oddly enough, the police inspector speaks a fluent if archaic English -
"After a cursory examination of the scene, I will commence your interogation.")
But none of this really detracts from the story - a fast-paced thriller that keeps you
guessing.
Local residents might have fun identifying
the models for some of the nastier characters. I doubt if Nigel Mason or Nick Blackbeard
will be flattered by the portrayal of Dan Bordon, the vulgar and ruthless rafting magnate.
There are plenty of identifiable locations and lashings of local colour.
Astuti has to admit to a weakness for the
hard-boiled, hard-drinking and often morally flawed private eye. Hammett's Nick and Nora
were never without a slug of bourbon and even Sherlock Holmes had his cocaine habit. So I
do find Pen and T rather disappointingly wholesome with their Green Sands and wholemeal
apple pie. I'd prefer a cynical sleuth to these smug ones. But that aside, The Kris of
Death offers sufficient intrigue to keep you reading to the end. |